The chart beloe shows yhe number of Australian students studied from 2004 to 2006
The chart describes information about how many Australian
students
educated
in five different countries between 2004 to 2006.
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were educated
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest number of students
studied in both countries,namely the USA and New Zealand while
the figure for the UK accounted for average than others over the period. Moreover
, it is notewothy
that two countries, ( Germany and Japan) recorded the lowest results during the period.
In detail, the rate of Correct your spelling
noteworthy
students
, who studied in the USA was just above 2500 at the beginning of the period, afterwards, there was witnessed an increase slightly to 2700 in 2005 and to 2800 in 2006. Besides
that, the shares
of Fix the agreement mistake
share
students
in New Zealand was
similar Correct subject-verb agreement
were
as
the USA, Change preposition
to
however
it went up to 2600 in 2006.
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however,
In contrast
, it is apparent that,
the tendency for the UK represented about 1500 at the initial point, Remove the comma
apply
thereafter
there saw a negligible rise to around 1600 in 2005, and then
remained unchanged at the end
of the duration. Furthermore
, German
and Japan were just under 300 in 2004, Correct your spelling
Germany
following
this
, these experienced a small fall to 250 in 2005. Last
but not least, both figures went to 300 in 2006.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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