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The chart beloe shows yhe number of Australian students studied from 2004 to 2006

The chart beloe shows yhe number of Australian students studied from 2004 to 2006
The chart describes information about how many Australian
students
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educated
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were educated
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 in five different countries between 2004 to 2006.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest number of
students
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 studied in both countries,namely the USA and New Zealand
while
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 the figure for the UK accounted for average than others over the period.
Moreover
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, it is
notewothy
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noteworthy
 that two countries, ( Germany and Japan) recorded the lowest results during the period. In detail, the rate of
students
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, who studied in the USA was just above 2500 at the beginning of the period, afterwards, there was witnessed an increase slightly to 2700 in 2005 and to 2800 in 2006.
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 that, the
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 of
students
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 in New Zealand
was
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were
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 similar
as
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 the USA,
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however
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 it went up to 2600 in 2006.
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, it is apparent that
,
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 the tendency for the UK represented about 1500 at the initial point,
thereafter
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 there saw a negligible rise to around 1600 in 2005, and
then
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 remained unchanged
at the end
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 of the duration.
Furthermore
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,
German
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Germany
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and Japan were just under 300 in 2004,
following
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this
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, these experienced a small fall to 250 in 2005.
Last
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 but not least, both figures went to 300 in 2006.

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