Your Local Travel Agent Recommended A Place To Visit And You Are Now Having A Good Time There. Write A Letter To Your Travel Agent And Tell Them The Following: – What You Have Been Doing – What You Hope To Do Before The End Of Your Holiday – Say Why You Like This Place
Dear Mr. Hansen,
I am writing to you as promised in order to share my holiday experience, so far.
Starting with the things I have been involved in,
such
as last
week I went to Aqua World and saw the dolphin show. Additionally
, I have been swimming every day and I am starting to get a great tan. Yesterday, I met some other hotel guests from my country, and we had lunch together.
Prior to my vacation finishing, I have made plans to go out on a trek this
Saturday. I am really looking forward to it very much. After that, I hope to take a river cruise which also
includes a five-course dinner. Time permitting, I will finish with a coffee in that famous store you recommended that is
in Rundle Mall.
As to why I am so enthralled, it is an excellent spot for a vacation, combining my interest in water sports with the chance to experience culinary delights. Also
, there has never been a dull moment as there is so much to do and experience.
Once again thank you so much for your excellent recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Sam SmithSubmitted by amandacflago23 on
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Task Achievement
To improve your task achievement, ensure that each paragraph clearly addresses a different aspect of the prompt. For instance, when discussing why you like the place, delve deeper into personal feelings and provide more examples. This will make your response more comprehensive.
Coherence and Cohesion
For better coherence and cohesion, consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. This includes showing contrast, addition, and sequence. While your letter has a good flow, variety in linking expressions can enhance the reader's understanding and the overall structure of your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite