the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about how many
visitors
visited a specific island
in Caribbean
between the years 2010-2017.
Looking from an Correct article usage
the Caribbean
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that number
of Change the article
the number
visitors
has been
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
through out
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throughout
this
period. At first,
visitors
who stayed on island
were more than the Add an article
the island
one
who stayed on Correct pronoun usage
ones
cruise
ship.
In 2010, 1 Add an article
a cruise
the cruise
million
people in total visited this
island
. This
number experienced a gradual increase to almost 2.7 million
in 2016. Then
it was a significant rise to 3.5 million
visitors
in
the end of the period. Change the preposition
at
Numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
Number
visitors
in
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to
island
who liked to be on Add an article
the island
ship
experienced a fluctuation before 2013, which was 0.5 Correct article usage
the ship
million
visitors
. Following
this
, quantity
of them gradually increased to 2 Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
million
in 2017.
On the other hand
, the volume of visitors
who stayed on island
was almost 0.7 Add an article
the island
million
in 2000. For one year, this
quantity didn't change, and then
it were
gradually increased to 1.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
visitors
in 2010, and remained steadily the same number until 2017, except for a small dip in 2016.Submitted by rr
on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 3 times.
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