In social situations, some people believe that it is better to be a good listener than a good talker. Do you agree or disagree?
Communication is a key aspect between
people
, especially so in a social setting. A handful of Use synonyms
people
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carry
the opinion that it is vital to be a person who listens well as compared to someone who speaks well. In Verb problem
hold
this
essay, I will delve into both sides of the coin before presenting the reason why I think that it is crucial to strike a balance and be the best of both worlds.
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To begin
, a good listener is someone who takes in the information attentively Linking Words
while
the other party is talking. They Linking Words
also
give the speaker the opportunity to talk without any Linking Words
interuption
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interruption
interruptions
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not only allows the person presenting the information to speak with no pressure but Linking Words
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make
them feel heard. Adding on, a person who listens well always provides a response relative to what they have heard which goes to show they are indeed listening and not just nodding their heads in agreement, making them a great company to be with A great example would be allowing a friend who has had a bad day to express his grievances without any judgement.
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on the other side of the coin, there are the good talkers. They are able to converse fluently with any given topic with anyone who's willing to lend them Linking Words
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ear. These Change the article
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people
are usually, if not, always, the catalyst of the social event and the Use synonyms
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pleaser. A good talker is essential for breaking the ice at any event and is the one with the most connections. Use synonyms
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, my close friend, Justin is someone Linking Words
whom
is very well connected Change the pronoun
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due to
the fact that he is always the one who Linking Words
initiated
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has opened doors for him to go from job to job with ease Linking Words
due to
his wide social circle.
In conclusion, I agree to a certain extent that being a great listening ear is vital but I felt that being a great speaker is Linking Words
also
crucial in a social convention as well, Linking Words
due to
the limitless possibility of expanding horizons.Linking Words
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Effectively balanced discussion of both perspectives.
coherence and cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion.
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Effective use of personal examples.
coherence and cohesion
Logical and easily navigable structure.