The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which sugar
is produced from sugar
cane. Overall
, the procedure consists of seven stages including, harvesting, crushing, purifying, centrifuging, drying and cooling.
The process
starts when sugar
cans become ready to harvest. The growing process
may take about twelve to eighteen months. Next,
they are harvested either manually by a farmer or mechanically by means of a combined machine. After that, the sugar
canes are crushed and turned into juice through a crusher machine. Once the resulting juice undergoes a purifying procedure using a limestone filter, the purified juice is poured into an evaporator to heat it until changes to syrup. Furthermore
, there is a centrifuging stage in order to separate crystals from syrup to make the resulting sugar
useable. The process
ends when sugar
is collected in a suitable container and undergoes a drying as well as
a cooling stage. Then
sugar
is ready for usage.Submitted by samira.nezhadamin on
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