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A museum near your home is looking for people to do unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntery work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the volunteer work in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to lodge an application for a temporary unpaid job position in your museum. I saw your advertisement yesterday and really want to become a part of your team. Please allow me to provide some details about me. I have recently graduated from the University of North Carolina, where I studied history to teach children at schools.
Thus
, I need some practice before the start of the semester in September. I would like to conduct excursions for kids in the Egyptian and Asian sections of your museum since I have vast experience as a babysitter (3 brothers) and a guide (summer camps).
Moreover
, my coursework was dedicated to the early ages of the Egyptian empire. I have already prepared my schedule for
such
 an activity and am perfectly ready to do my voluntary work every Sunday from 8 a.m. to 3 p.m. for the whole summer. Thank you for the opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Vasilii Rasskazov
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Style
It's important to maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter and ensure proper use of formal salutations and closings.
Structure
Consider dividing your letter into clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific aspect of your application. This has been done well, helping the reader to follow your argument.
Content
You could enhance your letter by including more detailed examples of your previous experience, specifically how it relates to the tasks you would perform at the museum.
Closing
The closing of your letter is polite and anticipates a response, which is excellent for this sort of communication.
Content Organized
Your letter introduces your main reason for applying, your background, and availability clearly and coherently.
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