The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table illustrates the
number
of
people
who have been to other countries for travel from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of
people
who went
traveling
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was increasing in
this
15-year period. The only exception that can be observed was America in 2005,
this
year the
number
declined slightly. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that Europe was the most popular place in
this
survey
through
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15 years, and the proportion of Europe in five different years was nearly three-fifths of the total. The location which has the lowest
number
of tourists was in the Middle East. And that was almost half of Africa. The figures for
people
who joined tours gained slowly in Europe between 1995 and 2005 but in the first 5 years, the numbers grew dramatically. Africa was another tourist sport that
people
may not like to go
,
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because
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the numbers were always two-digit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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