The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about internet users in three countries between 1999 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the proportion of people using
internet
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the internet
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to the total
people
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number of people
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living in three distinct nations, namely the USS, Canada,
Mexico
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and Mexico
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, between 1999 and 2009.
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, all of the statistical data from the nations combined indicated an upward trend with various variations at that period. Originally, the figures were 0%, 10%, and 25%, in that order. But towards the end, they were 50%, 90%, and 100%, respectively. The USA ranked first among the others. Unfortunately, they were surpassed by Canada since the number of Americans browsing online was lower than that of Canadians in 2003. 
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, those two lines overlapped at 20% in 2005 and after
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the gaps returned and grew larger. The figure of online users in Mexico consistently lagged behind other nations since they came in lowest. The reason for their place remaining unchanged for the first to the
last
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session was their slight increase in changes
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