The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The given chart illustrates how many people came from a foreign country to visit places
such
as the coast, Linking Words
mountains
and lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
To commence with, in 1987, the coast had already been on the top with 40,000 people in a year . It noticeably decreased , in 1992, to approximately 35,000 visitors Use synonyms
then
steadily rose to more than 70,000 people in 2007. Linking Words
Although
the reservoir took first place , in 2002, by showing a result of 70,000, meanwhile lakes and Linking Words
mountains
had an equal number, in 1992, with 20,000 individuals.But Use synonyms
then
the Linking Words
mountains
slightly increased in 2007 (25,000).
Use synonyms
Overall
, only 2 areas showed a huge increase in 2007, Linking Words
whereas
the basin had an increase in 2002. Only the Linking Words
mountains
illustrated a low result during all these years. Use synonyms
While
lakes had a drop in 2007 and coast only in the beginning.Linking Words
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