The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The given chart illustrates how many people came from a foreign country to visit places
such
as the coast, mountains
and lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
To commence with, in 1987, the coast had already been on the top with 40,000 people in a year . It noticeably decreased , in 1992, to approximately 35,000 visitors then
steadily rose to more than 70,000 people in 2007. Although
the reservoir took first place , in 2002, by showing a result of 70,000, meanwhile lakes and mountains
had an equal number, in 1992, with 20,000 individuals.But then
the mountains
slightly increased in 2007 (25,000).
Overall
, only 2 areas showed a huge increase in 2007, whereas
the basin had an increase in 2002. Only the mountains
illustrated a low result during all these years. While
lakes had a drop in 2007 and coast only in the beginning.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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