Different types of environmental pollution seem to be affecting an increasing number of people in the world. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions would you suggest?
Environmental issues have been problems that affect people in the world significantly. There are several human actions that lead to the damage of
nature
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Due to
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fact, the Linking Words
government
should come up with regulations to control human behaviours that affect Use synonyms
nature
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One of the possible causes is human behaviours that affect the Use synonyms
environment
directly. Use synonyms
This
happens because many individuals do not have a concern about Linking Words
nature
and only take advantage of their surroundings without preserving them. Use synonyms
For example
, many factories from the textile industry in Indonesia are built in residential areas and throw their chemical wastes into water areas without purifying them. Linking Words
Consequently
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environment
and people around them are poisoned because of toxic materials.
One immediate practical solution is to make a regulation about the Use synonyms
environment
and impose severe punishments for offenders. Use synonyms
However
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this
action should be done by the Linking Words
government
because they have the authority to audit factories and Use synonyms
also
individuals. After the regulations are made, the offenders would think twice before taking an action that might affect the Linking Words
environment
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For instance
, the Linking Words
government
should sentence the factory which is proven throwing their waste illegally with a huge amount of money as a penalty. Undoubtedly, the regulation could prevent the increase in pollution Use synonyms
that is
caused by human habits.
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To conclude
, the Linking Words
government
should regulate human actions and impose harsh punishments for the offenders of environmental issues. These actions should be implemented Use synonyms
due to
the fact that the root of environmental pollution comes from humans. Linking Words
As a result
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this
solution could prevent people from damaging Linking Words
nature
consciously and unconsciously.Use synonyms
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