The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
Contained in the two bar charts are data relating to the studying
hours
of
students
in five distinctive universities which are on weekdays and on
weekends
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of
hours
on weekdays remained slightly unchanged,
whereas
there was a decline on
weekends
. It can be
also
observed that
University
C on weekdays and
University
A on
weekends
have the topmost proportion of
hours
that
students
studied,
while
University
D's
hours
were the smallest in the two charts. Beginning with weekday rates, it is evident that they were far higher than weekend rates. With 10.6,
hours
of studying in
University
C is the highest on the chart.
This
is
in contrast
with
University
D where
students
spent at least
hours
of studying, with 9.6.
This
is followed by
University
B,
University
E and
University
A with respective figures being 10.1, 10 and 9.8. Turning to
weekends
rates, it can be observed that
students
spent the most in
University
A, at 9. The noticeable point is a fluctuation in
University
D, it dropped down to 5.6 which was the lowest of the charts.

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