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The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
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Contained in the two bar charts are data relating to the studying
hours
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 of
students
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 in five distinctive universities which are on weekdays and on
weekends
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.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the number of
hours
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 on weekdays remained slightly unchanged,
whereas
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 there was a decline on
weekends
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. It can be
also
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 observed that
University
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 C on weekdays and
University
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 A on
weekends
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 have the topmost proportion of
hours
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 that
students
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 studied,
while
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University
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 D's
hours
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 were the smallest in the two charts. Beginning with weekday rates, it is evident that they were far higher than weekend rates. With 10.6,
hours
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 of studying in
University
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 C is the highest on the chart.
This
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 is
in contrast
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 with
University
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 D where
students
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 spent at least
hours
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 of studying, with 9.6.
This
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 is followed by
University
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 B,
University
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 E and
University
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 A with respective figures being 10.1, 10 and 9.8. Turning to
weekends
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 rates, it can be observed that
students
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 spent the most in
University
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 A, at 9. The noticeable point is a fluctuation in
University
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 D, it dropped down to 5.6 which was the lowest of the charts.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, students, weekends, university with synonyms.
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