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The table below gives information about students enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The table below gives information about students enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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 illustrates the
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 of student enrollments at Bristol University, highlighting the change in two different categories based on
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 and origin in the span of eight decades from 1928 to 2008.
Initially
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, the
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 of admissions in 1928
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 as low as in 1928, when the
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 was only 218
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.
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, the amount started to grow rapidly to 1046
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 after 30 years
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 and ended up with 6377 enrollments in 2008.
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 the percentages of the
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 were generally equal in 1928
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42% of them were female
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 and the rest were male
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 at 58%.
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 the portion of male
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 who enrolled in 1958 dominated 68%. Recently, the
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 of
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returns
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 to a similar
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 of 54%
female
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of female
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students
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 and 46% of male
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 in 2008.
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, the proportion of
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 who came from within 30 miles of Bristol
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 50%, and only 5% of
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 came from overseas. In 1958, the
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 of Bristol residents dropped to 14%,
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 only 6%
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students
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of students
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 from abroad.
Instead
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 in 2008, the
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 of
students
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 who came from overseas grew significantly to 28%, and
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 data was
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 with the
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 of nearby
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 at only 1-2%.
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, the admission growth over the period given had multiplied constantly;
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,
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 the
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 of
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 and area of origin changes over time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, gender, students, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 6 times.
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