The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two given maps indicate street connections to a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the track underwent a significant change.
In 2007, the city
hospital was surrounded by Ring Road
and connected to Hospital Road
which access to the city
road
. On the east and west of Hospital Road
, there were bus tops and car
parks for both the public and staff.
In 2010, at the intersections of streets: Ring Road
and Hospital Road
; and Hospital Road
and City
Road
, people constructed two roundabouts. In addition
, the bus stop was removed and then
a new bus station was built on the west of Hospital Road
and it was linked to two roundabouts. Moreover
, staff and public car
park
were divided. The staff car
park
did not change position, however
, it was narrowed because of the appearance of roundabouts. Besides
, the public car
park
was moved to the east of the city
hospital and a new gate was added to join Ring Road
and the public car
park
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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