The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged 18 and 34.

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The table compares the number of 18 and 34-year-old Americans participating in various sports in 2010 and 2014.

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, it can be seen that running is still the most popular activity and the least popular is still baseball,

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, the numbers have changed significantly. The table shows that the sports in which people were more motivated to take part in 2014 were running, hiking and yoga. Running and yoga have both increased by 3

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in the four-year period. Yoga increased from 9 to 12

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running rose from 15 to 18

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individuals in 2014.

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, 2

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additional participants took up hiking

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of the period.

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, people find team sports less interesting than individual activities. Basketball, baseball and softball all have between 1,2 and 1,6

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fewer participants. People are

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much less inspired by swimming in 2014 than in 2010. It dropped by 2,5

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individuals in the end. The one sport that showed little change was weightlifting, which fell down just by 0,2% during

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time period.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

176 words

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The table below shows the changes in participation levels in various sports in the USA between 2010 and 2014 for people aged 18 and 34.

Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

today, students can benefits from widers information through internet. some people think that tradition schooling disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more people are opting for and consuming ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice has more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss

An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?