The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people traveling to one University for work or study in 2004 and 2009

The charts  below show the main methods of transportation for people traveling to one University for work or study in 2004 and 2009
The pie chart compares the differences in transportation that
people
get to University between 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, the
percentage
of buses and cars was higher than other transport in both time periods
while
the least part of
people
used trains and bicycles from 2004 to 2009. As the pie chart reveals, the highest
percentage
of
people
go to university by car and bus at 51 per cent and 33%, respectively in 2004.
Moreover
, the
percentage
of using bicycles and trains was the lowest at 9 per cent and 3% respectively in 2004. The figure for walking was 4% in 2004.
By contrast
, the highest
percentage
of Transportation was bus and car at 46% and 28% respectively in 2009. The
percentage
of bicycles and trains was almost the same at 16% and 4%, respectively in 2009.
However
, some
people
prefer to walk other transport the
percentage
of walking at 6% in 2009.
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  • Public transportation
  • Private vehicles
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Environmental impact
  • Commute
  • Utility
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