The pie charts below show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008
The pie charts compare supplies of
electricity
in India
, Sweden
, Morocco
, and Vietnam
mainly for 5 years.
It is observed that the most significant amounts of electricity
were produced from hydropower
and fossil fuels
. Morocco
's and Sweden
's electropower depended on hydropower
, while
India
and Vietnam
took much of their energy from fossil fuels
. In contrast
to all countries, Sweden
was the only country that used nuclear power
extensively, with high demand, while
India
used some, but not as much. And the
remaining two countries did not use nuclear Correct word choice
The
power
as a source of electricity
.
According to
the diagrams, Morocco
dominated in utilizing hydropower
for its energy supply, with 95.5%. The second country is Sweden
; its hydroelectric power
accounted for 52%, whereas
its main supply came from nuclear power
, which provided 44%. The remaining least amount of electricity
in these two countries was obtained from fossil fuels
(Morocco
4.5% and Sweden
4%).
On the contrary
, in Vietnam
and India
, the main sources of electricity
were produced by fossil fuels
. While
India
relied heavily on fossil fuels
, with a percentage of 81.9%, Vietnam
's electricity
supply was made up of this
source by almost 56%. Interestingly, the usage of hydropower
was responsible for 14.6% of electricity
in India
, but in Vietnam
, this
percentage was almost 44%. Similar to Sweden
, India
's electricity
supply used nuclear power
, even though it was not a popular type of electricity
production (3.5%).Submitted by minimix1203 on
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