The pie charts below show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008

The pie charts below show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries between 2003 and 2008
The pie charts compare supplies of
electricity
in
India
,
Sweden
,
Morocco
, and
Vietnam
mainly for 5 years. It is observed that the most significant amounts of
electricity
were produced from
hydropower
and fossil
fuels
.
Morocco
's and
Sweden
's electropower depended on
hydropower
,
while
India
and
Vietnam
took much of their energy from fossil
fuels
.
In contrast
to all countries,
Sweden
was the only country that used nuclear
power
extensively, with high demand,
while
India
used some, but not as much.
And the
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remaining two countries did not use nuclear
power
as a source of
electricity
.
According to
the diagrams,
Morocco
dominated in utilizing
hydropower
for its energy supply, with 95.5%. The second country is
Sweden
; its hydroelectric
power
accounted for 52%,
whereas
its main supply came from nuclear
power
, which provided 44%. The remaining least amount of
electricity
in these two countries was obtained from fossil
fuels
(
Morocco
4.5% and
Sweden
4%).
On the contrary
, in
Vietnam
and
India
, the main sources of
electricity
were produced by fossil
fuels
.
While
India
relied heavily on fossil
fuels
, with a percentage of 81.9%,
Vietnam
's
electricity
supply was made up of
this
source by almost 56%. Interestingly, the usage of
hydropower
was responsible for 14.6% of
electricity
in
India
, but in
Vietnam
,
this
percentage was almost 44%. Similar to
Sweden
,
India
's
electricity
supply used nuclear
power
, even though it was not a popular type of
electricity
production (3.5%).
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