You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. In your letter, explain - •why it is important for you •how fast you need it back •why you need his/her expertise

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Dear Alica, Hope you are doing well! I am writing

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letter for your assistance in translating my lease agreement for the house,which is written in French and it is impossible for me to read it as I do not know

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.Accidentally,I opted for the French

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for mailing documents

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of English during the agreement of the lease of the house.I requested to authority to put my name on the

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of the lease of the house as soon as possible because

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is the supporting

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for my permanent residency.After my request,

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letter is received by me in the French

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.Immediately, I contacted you for your help as

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is your first

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and you are more proficient in

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than others.

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letter is more significant for me as it is a supporting

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of my Permanent residency for a specific region .I want to confirm that all the mentioned information is correct in

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before uploading my PR portal .It is my humble request to you to revert back quickly with the translation of

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. I am waiting for your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Kamal.

kamalkaur.erSun Aug 04 2024

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task achievement

You provided a complete response and clearly explained why the document is important, how urgently you need it, and why you need your friend's expertise. Well done!

coherence cohesion

Make sure to break down your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs. This will enhance the clarity of your letter.

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Watch out for small grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'I requested to authority' could be 'I requested the authority.'

task achievement

The tone of your letter is appropriate for the situation and feels polite yet urgent.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-constructed and polite, setting a friendly tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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