You have received an important document that needs to be translated. Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate this important document for you. In your letter, explain - •why it is important for you •how fast you need it back •why you need his/her expertise

Dear Alica, Hope you are doing well! I am writing
this
letter for your assistance in translating my lease agreement for the house,which is written in French and it is impossible for me to read it as I do not know
this
language
.Accidentally,I opted for the French
language
for mailing documents
instead
of English during the agreement of the lease of the house.I requested to authority to put my name on the
document
of the lease of the house as soon as possible because
this
document
is the supporting
document
for my permanent residency.After my request,
this
letter is received by me in the French
language
.Immediately, I contacted you for your help as
this
is your first
language
and you are more proficient in
this
language
than others.
This
letter is more significant for me as it is a supporting
document
of my Permanent residency for a specific region .I want to confirm that all the mentioned information is correct in
this
document
before uploading my PR portal .It is my humble request to you to revert back quickly with the translation of
this
document
. I am waiting for your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Kamal.
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task achievement
You provided a complete response and clearly explained why the document is important, how urgently you need it, and why you need your friend's expertise. Well done!
coherence cohesion
Make sure to break down your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs. This will enhance the clarity of your letter.
general
Watch out for small grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'I requested to authority' could be 'I requested the authority.'
task achievement
The tone of your letter is appropriate for the situation and feels polite yet urgent.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-constructed and polite, setting a friendly tone.

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