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The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 2004 and 2013.

The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1984, 2004 and 2013.
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The charts compare how many new
cars
 were sold in Australia in the years 1994, 2004 and 2023.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the sales of sedans saw a significant decrease,
while
 the figure for other
cars
 rose gradually.
However
, the total sale of
cars
 went up rapidly over the period.
To begin
, in 1984
there
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were sold 42,900
cars
 in total,
whereas
 in 2003
this
 figure was
a
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much higher, at 71,000 but in 2013 it witnessed the highest
sale
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sales
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 among other years, at 85,000. In the year 1994, the sales of sedans experienced the highest proportion, at 74% which was followed by a quick decline in 2004 and 2013, at 62% and 51%, respectively. Regarding other types of
cars
, in 1994 it stood at 19%, and
then
 the figure grew
up
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moderately to 21% and 32%, in 2004 and 2013, in turn.
In contrast
, the sales of SUVs
cars
was
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were
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 only 7% in 1994 before witnessing a slight growth to 17% in 2004.
Moreover
, it remained
steadily
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 in 2013.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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