In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

In the recent era, the rise of automated
vehicles
is taking place, where it is believed that the people using these
vehicles
for their journey will be the only ones inside.
This
essay will discuss the advantages of
vehicles
operated by AI
along with
some serious drawbacks to society and jobs.
To begin
with, many organisations have developed certain AI
models
which can control the
overall
operation of a vehicle without any need for human input,
although
these
models
were specially designed for operating the small sized
vehicles
in huge factories and warehouses, some car manufacturers have
also
started to implement these AI
models
in their products (cars, truck and trains) insisting that
vehicles
operated with
driverless
technology
are more accurate and efficient, with a positive rate of full accuracy
while
executing a number of tasks.
This
can be proven from an analysis conducted by the national government of Tanzania where these AI
models
were tested in simulated traffic conditions and real-life scenarios were included
such
as
models
of pedestrians being placed around the corners and turns, surprisingly, the tasks were executed with an accuracy of hundred per cent in a more efficient way than a human could perform.
On the other hand
, if
driverless
technology
is adopted on a massive scale
then
there will be detrimental effects on society
such
as the jobs related to driving and operating
vehicles
will have
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negative impact,
moreover
, professionals who are already in
this
profession will face frequent layoffs and the number of opportunities will be reduced
along with
the growth in
this
career will come to a stop. An example of
this
prediction can be taken from a survey conducted in the year of 2014 where around 90% of warehouse workers lost their jobs
due to
organisations starting to adopt
driverless
technology
, for these reasons I don't think that the advantages of automated
driverless
technology
outweigh the disadvantages.
To conclude
, introducing AI-operated
vehicles
can be a safe and efficient method for organisations allowing them to save their expenses on hiring professionals,
on the contrary
,
this
can affect the livelihood of workers if
driverless
technology
is implemented on a large scale.
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