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AI art repersents a groundbreaking leap in artistic innovation, pushing the boundaries and challenging the conventional notions of human artistic expression – a threat to the essence of art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.[157]

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Artificial Intelligence has been a hot talking topic of late. With many rapid achievements, it has proven to be vital in various fields, especially in
art
, but still raises controversy and concerns.
While
 some people claim that AI
art
 helps to break new grounds and push boundaries, others worry about its challenging the human perception of
art
. In
this
 essay, both views will be discussed before coming to a concrete conclusion. On the one hand, AI itself has been useful in making breakthroughs and aiding people in many spheres of
art
. AI systems act as
a
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collaborator
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 and provide artistic designers with novel ideas and aspirations, helping them
further
 develop their creativity and push them out of their traditional assumptions. If properly used,
this
 invention’s seemingly infinite sources of information will be a breeding ground for budding artists to try out their new ideas on different materials.
For example
, in the fields of photography, blurry images are now able to be restored by less time-consuming methods.
Moreover
, AI can be of great value in that it democratizes the
art
 field, making it accessible
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 everyone even if they have no expertise or haven’t been through proper training.
On the other hand
, Artificial Intelligence still
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 some potential downsides, harming the true emotional and spiritual value of
art
. AI is in fact human-made, so it can only create what has been coded and fed to them.
Consequently
, when the system is presented with a question that requires a conceptual understanding of the world, its inability to think will generate
such
 gibberish with biased standards, raising the issue of misinformation and harming the real concept of
art
.
Additionally
, breaking into the
art
 world, which is already competitive and filled with vulnerable individuals trying to make
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ends meet, is a violation of
labor
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 for the mimicking and copying nature of AI.
This
 in turn will leave the authors with no credit and compensation, leading to job losses in the sector. Taken altogether,
although
 AI can be a real collaborator in
art
, I still hold the view that there are more problems
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 to be tackled. To make use of the invention, we have to be smart users and embrace the artificial into our daily lives.
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task achievement
Your essay addresses the topic well and provides a balanced discussion of both views, but it would benefit from more concrete examples to support your points and strengthen your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that all sentences within the paragraph are relevant to this idea. This will enhance coherence and make your argument more compelling.
task achievement
You have provided a comprehensive response that discusses both views and offers a clear opinion.
coherence cohesion
The essay is logically structured, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
task achievement
You’ve managed to convey clear and comprehensive ideas, which show your understanding of the topic at hand.
coherence cohesion
You’ve successfully included an introduction and conclusion, bracketing your discussion well.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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