Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems
Dear Steven,
I am writing
this
letter because after the last
pipe repair who occurred the problem at the same point. Unfortunately, the plumber changed the pipeline in the bathroom, but this
had been a temporary solution.
The pipeline under the sink was leaked and dripped down drop by drop into the bathroom cabinet. Therefore
, it was ruined and I had to buy a new one. We had to solve the issue before installing a new cabinet.
Thereafter
, I informed you of the leak, and you sent a repairman to solve it. The first week, there was not any trouble but then
water started to flow at the same point. In addition
, it causes a bad odour. The stink became hard for us and reduced our quality of life. Also
, the leakage may spread to other places. Consequently
, it leads to bigger crises.
I would request to send a plumber again who can repair it properly. If possible, when he comes, I want to be at home showing him directly and if it is working properly.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
TaylorSubmitted by jigglypuff
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coherence cohesion
Your letter is clear and logical, but be sure to check for grammatical inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, such as 'the plumber changed the pipeline in the bathroom, but this had been a temporary solution.’
coherence cohesion
Ensure every paragraph has a single clear idea. The mention of 'bad odour' and 'the stink' could be placed in the paragraph discussing the problems directly.
task achievement
You have covered all the required points in your letter (details of the last repair, current problems, and how you would like them solved). However, be a bit more specific about why the solution did not hold.
task achievement
Your writing tone is polite and suitable for the situation. Continue using a respectful tone when addressing your landlord.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriately formal and polite.
task achievement
Your letter covers all necessary points requested in the task prompt.