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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the news of a different occupation in the United Kingdom and their income. It
also
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 illustrates the average occupied
hours
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 of each profession.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Poice, Nurses are being paid the lowest,
however
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, other professions like Teachers, and Firefighter receive slightly higher
salary
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 than both other occupations.
Lastly
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, the underground driver has the highest proportion of wages with fewer working duration.
To begin
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 with, the Police work forty
hours
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 per quarter a month and earn about 22,000, they have a slight increment in their pay of 1,000 after working three years.
Likewise
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, a Nurse works 38
hours
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 a week and receives around 19000 after soaring in income.
Therefore
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, Teachers have the highest working time of 55
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 with an income of nearly 33,000 after working several years.
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, The firefighters earn 40,000 a week by working 55
hours
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,
while
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 they receive an increment of 3000 ( 43000).
Subsequently
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, the Underground driver has the lowest working period of 36
hours
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 and the highest earnings of roughly 52000 after having experience of several years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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