These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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After covid outbreak in 2020, most universities have started online learning to provide
courses
for their
students
.
This
way of learning continued to be used until now because it is considered an easier way rather than attending university. I personally think that being present in university classes is better than joining online. On the one hand, internet-based
courses
could be done anywhere, whether in the bedroom or even in a cafe.
This
might be useful for working
students
because they don't need to spend much time travelling to university.
For example
, coffee shop baristas in Indonesia have experienced having classes
while
doing their job, they do
this
because they need to earn more money in order to fund their family spending, so taking online
courses
could help them do both work and study without giving up one of those.
On the other hand
, science major
such
as engineering or medicine mostly have laboratory work or practical lessons in their syllabus. Those
courses
involved lots of equipment
that is
only available on campus.
Moreover
, attending that kind of course physically could help
students
understand the lesson better.
For instance
, there is one article stating that half of medical
students
in covid era who learn most of their
courses
through Zoom are struggling in their co-assistant phase because they only learn it by theory.
To sum up
everything that has been stated so far, online learning surely makes studying more approachable to everyone but for some majors that contain more practical learning than theory it is more convenient to learn it straight from the class.
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