You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart provides key information about the number of international students from four different nations in Australia starting from 1982 to 2000.
overall
, it is clear from the graph that Indonesian students were ranked as the highest rate of international students in comparison with the other countries.
As it
is shown in the graph, Australia hosted most of those learners between 1996 and 1998.
.It might be said that all four nations except Malaysia were not likely to send their citizens to study abroad until the period from 1986 to 1988 in which it witnessed a significant increase. Malaysis's level was improving with time until it fell to 25000 Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
recovered to nearly 27.000.
To illustrate more, Indonesia started with a minimum rate of approximately 1000 then
gradually increased to its highest peak of nearly 27,000 thousand that's when it dropped slightly to 23,000.
Hong Kong and Singapore demonstrated quite the same rhythm. They showed gradual improvement until they reached 18.000 and 20000 respectively.Submitted by the.majesty2011 on
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