Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, many minors put the

mjority

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majority

of their time on their handsets. In my opinion, owing to existing entertainment applications that are amusing on mobile phones,

this

trend occurs.

In addition

, I hold

this

view that it is a negative trend that can cause serious problems in juveniles' lives. On the one hand, nowadays, engineers come up with numerous applications that have several attractions for

children

;

thus

,

children

spend most of their time on them.

Moreover

, these software give juveniles some bonuses that deceive

children

into carrying on their activities.

For instance

, approximately 8 years ago, the bulk of

children

played with Clash of Clans for over 4 hours per day.

Further

and even more importantly,

this

issue is a negative modification that has several drawbacks and leads to detrimental effects on

children

's education. As the most significant effect, if

children

spend long hours

on

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dealing with smartphones, they do not have adequate time to carry out their assignments or study their books.

Hence

, they are not able to progress in their education or even nail down their subjects.

Furthermore

, recent studies have shown several hours of expenditure on electronic devices has a negative influence on their concentration.

For example

, it can be seen that the average grade of students who study in high schools dramatically decreased in Iran, so it can be concluded that

this

issue is not useful. In conclusion,

this

issue occurs because sophisticated engineers have the capability to amuse these age profiles that are under 18 years old easily.

In addition

, it is not helpful for them and can cause several educational problems for minors.