The charts below illustrate the market share of different smartphone brands in Russia and the amount imports that occurred in three consecutive years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the
percentage
Russia's
smartphone(Change preposition
of Russia's
samsung
, Change the capitalization
Samsung
apple
, xiomi
, oppo, vivo and others) market share and how much the country imports from 2019 to 2021.
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Xiaomi
Overall
, Samsung
is
mostly shared and imported in these three years, except Wrong verb form
was
the
first half of Change preposition
in the
the
2020, in that time Change the article
apply
apple
was shared and imported mostly and last
4 months of 2019 equal percetage
of the Correct your spelling
percentage
brand
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brands
samsung
and Change the capitalization
Samsung
apple
were shared and imported. Two brands were imported and shared least vivo and oppo, Capitalize word
Apple
however
there are Add a comma
however,
unnoticibale
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unnoticeable
difference
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differences
exists
between them.
It shows that Verb problem
apply
the
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in the
last
4 months of the
2019, Rushia shared and imported 18% of Change the article
apply
apple
and Capitalize word
Apple
samsung
, Change the capitalization
Samsung
then
samsung's
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Samsung's
percentage
had been gradually grown up and droped
4% in the Correct your spelling
dropped
last
4 months of 2020, as opposed to apple
significantly increased from 11% to 21%. Capitalize word
Apple
However
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However,
this
drawback did not last
longer, in the first qurter
year of 2021 Correct your spelling
quarter
samsumng
again reached Correct your spelling
Samsung
to
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apply
the
22% and Correct article usage
apply
apple
went down to 17%. Capitalize word
Apple
On the other hand
, while
oppo sometimes rise
to 1% Change the verb form
rises
than
vivo, most of the time Correct quantifier usage
more than
there
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their
percentage
are similar.
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percentages
Furthermore
, xiomi is
always Verb problem
Xiaomi
maintain
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maintains
medium
growth of Correct article usage
a medium
percentage
. While
the given brands are always in the market demands
, 30 to 40% are Fix the agreement mistake
demand
on
the other brands' Change preposition
in
hand
.Fix the agreement mistake
hands
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