The table gives information about the amount of tax collected in five countries for 4 hears between 1975 and 2005.

The table gives information about the amount of tax collected in five countries for 4 hears between 1975 and 2005.
The table illustrates how much tax was collected in five major
countries
in the years 1975,1985,1995 and 2005. The
overall
message from the data seems to be that the highest tax rate was shown by
Sweden
in all
countries
with the
USA
and
Japan
also
displaying a notable pattern.
To begin
with,
Sweden
and the
USA
were the
countries
with the highest proportion.
Sweden
started with 46% in 1975 ,which saw a gradual increase over the next two decades, reaching 51% in 1995,
while
the
USA
collected taxes almost twice as low as the figure for
Sweden
,
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27.1%. Meanwhile, in the
last
year,
Sweden
topped the list at 70.1% compared to other
countries
,
while
the
USA
's statistic remained relatively steady at 27.4%.
Similarly
, looking at the other three
countries
, all of them showed similar proportions and alternations.
Korea
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and
Japan
had similar tax rates of about 15-16% in 1975.
Whereas
Japan
grew marginally by 16%,
Korea
's figure nearly doubled after 10 years. Over the period,
Korea
,
Japan
and Turkey continued to increase. In 2005, statistics for
Korea
and Turkey were 27.3% and 27.4%, respectively.
However
,
Japan
’s rate rose slightly higher than both
countries
, reaching 32.1%
at the end
of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, sweden, usa, japan, korea with synonyms.
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