You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to ask you about one of the part-time courses which your college offers. I have enrolled in a part-time

course

on the technical inspection of lifts.

According to

your table time, it will start on 18th January. As you know

this

course

has many activities

such

as involving in the maintenance of equipment and having good well-being is very necessary. Unfortunately, recently, I faced difficulty with illness, and I will have surgery on my knee next week. So I would ask you to cancel my registration for

this

course

Lastly

, I would so appreciate it if you help me give me information about the next

course

. I am so pretty keen on enrolling in the next intake. Sincerely yours Masoud Mehranfar

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Task Achievement

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the prompt, providing clear reasons for canceling the course and making a new request. However, the explanation regarding how well-being is related to course activities could be made clearer.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider providing a more structured progression of ideas with clearer separation of the reasons for cancellation and the request for the next course.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate, enhancing the formal tone of the letter.

Task Achievement

The writing tone is suitable and polite for addressing a college administrator, making it appropriate for the context.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

135 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
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