The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The maps illustrate some changes that were made to the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and now.
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, the library design is modernized with the addition of leisure and technology functions.
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, tables and chair is removed.Linking Words
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