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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

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There are some individuals
that
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 believe it is better to be an employee of a large corporation compared to a small one. I believe it depends on the stage of
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career
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your career
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 you are. It is undeniable that
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 big corporations present vast resources for their employees to develop
at
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 their early years in the profession.
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 frequent updates to accounting standards, accountants need continuous education to keep their knowledge relevant and up-to-date.
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, having vast resources big companies are able to arrange
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 learning by in-house courses or by inviting experts to give lectures to employees.
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, the employee is able to learn and develop in their professional area.
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 progression is at a more reasonable pace at smaller companies. Because small entities are able to grow organically at a faster rate, they can make promotions more frequently in comparison to bigger ones.
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 trend presents an unmatched opportunity for those who have cemented their knowledge by working in a large company. These people are preferred by small corporations
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 their background and they can easily get hired and
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 become a primary candidate for any open position that carries significance.
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career
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 development brings all kinds of employment benefits with it,
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 as
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 more salary and bonuses. In conclusion, I think that working for both big
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and
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 small
company
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companies
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 has its own benefits
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 as continuous learning and faster promotions depending on at what stage of their
career
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 an employee is.

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task achievement
Consider diversifying examples to cover more than one profession or industry for a wider perspective, enhancing the task response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph flows smoothly into the next by using more transitional phrases.
coherence cohesion
You presented clear and logical paragraphs that address the key points of the prompt.
coherence cohesion
The essay structure, with a clear introduction and conclusion, helps in understanding your viewpoint effectively.
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You provided practical examples to illustrate how large and small companies benefit employees differently.
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Your position on the topic was presented clearly and consistently throughout the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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