You booked a tour package for your family through a travel agent. You had enjoyed the tour very much. Write a letter to the travel agent to thank them. In your letter: Mention the tour you took Describe the things about the tour you & your family liked the best Also, suggest any improvements to make things better

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude to your travel agent, which is "Universal Tour". To be frank, I went there with my family on 24th June, of course with your agent's staff.We had purchased tickets for the VIP class. Admittedly,

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tour package is astonishing! That's why, we could there the majority of ancient places,

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as museums, ruins and so on.

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, we could see numerous sculptures of popular people. It's true, your service is handy and convenient.

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, In my humble opinion, you should add additional employees for travel. As your customers would like extra and surprising services and staffs.

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, your agency will become one of the most magnificent services. All my family members would like to thank you for giving unforgettable travel. If you had not helped us on that tour, we would have had serious problems. Yours faithfully, Madina Mukhiddinova

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coherence cohesion

Consider using one paragraph for each main point for greater clarity.

task achievement

Ensure that the letter maintains a consistent tone throughout, keeping it formal yet friendly.

task achievement

The letter covers all the required points of the task effectively.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are both appropriate and cordial.

task achievement

The writing tone is suitably appreciative and polite, which matches the purpose of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

152 words

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