The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The line graph displays the changes in the crime rates of burglaries,
car
theft, and robbery in Manchester from 2003 to 2012.
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Overall
, burglary and Linking Words
car
theft crime rates reduced over the time Use synonyms
period
, and the Use synonyms
number
of crimes increased in Use synonyms
car
theft over the entire Use synonyms
period
.
The Use synonyms
number
of burglaries rose slightly to around 3,700 in 2004, Use synonyms
then
dropped sharply over the next six years to just above 1,100 in 2008, before slightly rising to nearly 1,500. Linking Words
This
figure remained stable Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
in 2012. The Use synonyms
number
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car
thefts fluctuated between the start of the Use synonyms
period
and 2009, ranging between 2,000 and 2,300, and Use synonyms
then
steadily increased to around 2,600 in 2012.
The Linking Words
number
of robberies was roughly 600 and rose slightly to just below 1,000 in 2005. Use synonyms
This
figure dropped slightly to around 500 in 2006 and remained stable Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
in 2012.Use synonyms
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