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The graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017

The graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017
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The graph illustrates the
number
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 of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017, categorized into those staying on
cruise
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 ships, those staying on the
island
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, and the total
number
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 of
visitors
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.
Overall
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, the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 increased significantly throughout the period, growing from 1
million
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 in 2010 to 3.5
million
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 in 2017.
Visitors
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 staying on
cruise
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 ships experienced the most notable rise, surpassing those staying on the
island
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 by the end of the period. In 2010, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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 was 0.75
million
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, higher than
cruise
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 ship
visitors
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, who accounted for only 0.25
million
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.
However
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,
cruise
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 ship
visitors
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 steadily increased over the years, overtaking
island
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visitors
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 in 2015 and reaching 2
million
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 by 2017.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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 rose more slowly, peaking at 1.5
million
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 in 2013 and fluctuating slightly before stabilizing at the same figure in 2017. By the end of the period,
cruise
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 ship
visitors
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 became the dominant group contributing to the total
number
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 of tourists.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, cruise, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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