The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table indicates the total number of
guest
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to the Ashdown Museum before and after it was rehabilitated.
In addition
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, a provided pie chart compares the satisfaction amount of
visitors
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in five different categories, in both years. A brief look at a pie chart from a year before renovation reveals that the share of dissatisfied and satisfied
visitors
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was noticeably higher than other groups, accounting for 40 % and 30 % of the total. The remaining 30% belonged to very satisfied, very dissatisfied and no response categories, with 15%,10 and 5 % respectively. A year after reopening, the share of very satisfied and satisfied individuals increased significantly to 35% and 40%, respectively. In comparison, the proportion of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied
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experienced a dramatic reduction to 15 and 5 each.
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, the amount of no response category remained unchanged at 5% during a given period.
Due to
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the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum, the number of
visitors
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increased from 74000 in the year before reconstruction to 92000 during the period after reformation. All in all,
it is clear that
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not only the satisfaction rate of
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after reopening activities
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but
also
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the total number of
visitors
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reached a peak of 92000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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