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The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the population of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.
The aforementioned table illustrates the differences in the population of districts in New York
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 from 1900 to 2000.
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, it can be seen that the number of individuals living in
Manhattan
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 decreases
among
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 the years
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 the number of individuals living in other districts,
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 as Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens and Staten Island, increases. First of all, it is evident that New York was the most densely populated in the 2000s, with 8,009,185 individuals residing in the city. 81% of
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 total comes from families living in other areas of the city
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 19% comes from
Manhattan
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, in the first year being compared, which is the 1800s, there were 79,216 residents in total.
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 mainly came from
Manhattan
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, with 60,515 people (76%) living there. The other 24% of the population were from other districts.
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, in the 1900s, there was
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total population of 3,437,202 people. More than half of these people (54%) were settling in
Manhattan
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,
while
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 the other 46% scattered around the city.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words manhattan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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