The illustration below shows how the water cycle works and the pie charts provide some statistical information.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration below shows how the water cycle works and the pie charts provide some statistical information.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The illustration below shows how the water cycle works and the pie charts provide some statistical information.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below illustrate different reasons why people drive to
work
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or cycle to
work
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.
Overall
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, people's most answered reason for driving to
work
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for comfort , which takes up to 40% and
reason
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the reason
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for cycling to
work
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is mostly
due to
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health and fitness, with less pollution both each taking up 30%. The highest contributing factors to the
overall
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reasons for cycling to
work
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are
as
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, as
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mentioned , Health and fitness , and less pollution at 60% for both. Next is no parking problem at 15%. And the least contributing factors are no cost and faster than driving , with the no cost reason 1% higher than the other at 12%.
In contrast
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, reasons for driving to
work
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are more evenly distributed , with the factor of distance to
work
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a bit higher than a fifth. Following that are factors
such
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as faster than cycling and the need to carry things to
work
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, both at 14%.
Finally
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at the lowest contribution to the chart is
due to
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the fact that it is safer than cycling , at 1% more than a tenth of the
overall
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pie chart.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, overall".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • transpiration
  • infiltration
  • groundwater
  • runoff
  • water vapor
  • cloud formation
  • solar energy
  • hydrological cycle
  • ecosystem
  • freshwater distribution
  • glaciers and ice caps
  • surface water
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