You have recently joined a sports training program and would like to tell your friend about it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: – explain what the training program is – describe why you think it is beneficial – persuade your friend to join the program as well You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Hi Lam, In your

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letter, you told me that you felt too fat and you wanted to lose weight. I currently join an interesting badminton training program, and

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am excited to tell you about it.

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curriculum will take 4 weeks total, with a lot of skills about badminton from the training to the tournament. They will

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provide many professional trainers who will help you from zero to hero. I think we should join the plan together because it will help us lose weight through a lot of training activities.

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, there is

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plenty of bonding time that we can spend together afther long time we can not see each other.

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but not least, I hear that your crush

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tyty, will

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join

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program, and you can see him if you paticipate in with me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I believe that we can have a wonderful time together in

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training. Love, Hana

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task response

For task response: add a bit more detail about the program, like where it is and how often you train.

task response

For task response: give one more clear reason why your friend should join, not only for weight loss.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: check word order and small link words so your ideas are easier to follow.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: keep each paragraph focused on one main point.

task response

For task response: you answer all parts of the letter and clearly invite your friend to join.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: your letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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