The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared

The pie and table illustrate the results of a survey of adult education

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The first chart illustrates the reasons behind adults' decision to study. The pie shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.

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, the percentage of education expenses accounted for almost half. Meanwhile, the average of the tax paper and employment was the lowest,

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the interest in the subject

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the highest in the study decision ranking.

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gaining qualification remained the second highest,

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, other decides was low in the figure. In the begging of the period, The cost of each course, individuals was the highest for 40%,

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employer decrase to 35%, and taxpayers was the lowest by 25%,

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the intrest in the subject remained the same of individuals by 40%, qualifacition proportion was decreased steadily by 38%,

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helpful for current job accounted for 22%. The improving prospect of promotion was 20%

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Enjoy learnig was 20% remaind the same,

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able to change jobes decline by 12%. And meeting people was 9% ant the end of the period.