The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical aplliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in housheholds in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two line charts illustrate the differences in ownership of electrical appliances and the number of hours spent doing housework in households in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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, ownership of electrical appliances increased over time,

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time spent on doing housework fell a lot. For ownerships graph, the washing machine increased steadily from 40 to 70 until 1960, before falling to just over 60 in 1980. After that, it increased gradually to around 65 by 2019. The refrigator started at 0 in 1920 and increased sharply to 100 by 1980 before remaining stable

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of the period. The final device is a vacuum cleaner , which showed the largest growth at the beginning toward 100 in 1980 , and remained at the same level

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of the period. For the second graph, the amount of housework dropped gradually to 20 by 1960, ending at 10 by the end of the period.

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ownership
household
electrical appliances
washing machine
refrigerator
vacuum cleaner
percentage
rise
increase
grow steadily
fall
drop
decline
reach
peak
almost all
hardly any
by contrast
over the period
weekly hours
housework
save time
in general
overall
compared with
from 1920 to 2019

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