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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Deforestation is a serious matter, as the forest throughout the world are coming to an end. What are the causes, solutions and effect of this problem.

People are becoming very selfish nowadays. They cut the trees in the forest and make use of them. Therefore, as a result, there is a rapid increase in the global warming. In this essay we will come to know the root cause, what effect does? And try to come up with some solutions.

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Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. •In what ways are computers a hindrance? •What is your opinion?

Nowadays, we use computers in many ways, either to work or at school. These computers have different advantages and disadvantages for us. Now I am going to compare the advantages and the disadvantages and in which ways are computers a hindrance then I will discuss my perspective.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

it is true that a large number of people throughout the world suffer from hunger even though the agricultural sector has seen many technological developments. There are several reasons for this and the lack of resources and adverse weather conditions are the most important among them. However, there are some measures that can be implemented to tackle this problem.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Over the last few decades, connectivity between the various remote parts of the world has significantly improved. Now people can travel to the places which were considered impossible to visit until a few years ago. As a result, the number of people visiting difficult places, such as the Sahara desert, the Antarctic and so on, has increased significantly. Although there are certain benefits for tourists in terms of experiencing once in a lifetime moment, there are few unforeseen disadvantages related to physical and mental health.

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young people traveling to different countries benefit them. Do you agree or disagree.

In the era of modernization, the trend towards travelling is exponentially growing. Therefore, some opine that explores different nations provides tremendous benefits to teenagers. I firmly agree with this notion. In this essay, I will elucidate the numerous merits of making excursions.

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Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, History is considered as a main subject in school, by some people, while others are of opinion that Science and Technology related are more essential than Historical events. Despite the significance Historica can have, I totally agree that science subjects are more important than Historyicaligy.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Despite living in the advanced era a plethora of people still depend on their parents, partner and teachers for making crucial decision of their life. I partially support this statement and think that both have its own value in our life either it is independent or dependent steps. I would like to discuss about both the agree and disagree views in the following paragraphs.

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some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy , with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this ?

A few people say that house and office need to keep clean and all items well-arranged in a particular area. I think it is important, I write up the reason in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific, research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Technology has evolved a lot since the 19th century and today there is a lot of information available on the finger tip. Few people might think it is good to share all the information as possible obtained from scientific, research, business and academic world while, some people still oppose the idea of sharing. In this essay, we will come to know the advantages and disadvantages of sharing it with the world and come to a conclusion why I do not support it.

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Many management interviews are based around assessing not only a person’s level of experience and knowledge but also their personality. Is leadership an innate skill? What other characteristics do companies look for in a manager?

A good leader must possess multiple qualities. For this reason, most of the companies need managers with qualities such as good personality, knowledge and experience in their work. Leadership is an acquired skill and heredity can help a person acquire this skill.

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

Food is deemed as the basic necessity for living beings and its demand is growing globally. This essay will discuss that the increasing population and the climate change are the main reasons for the high trade for food and suggest that adopting new farming methods can help the international community to meet this requirement.

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Some people agree with spending lots of money are large wedding while others think it is a waste of time what is your opinion

Sparing a huge sum of wealth is considered to be justified by a segment of the society. While there are others, who consider it, to be a waste of their wealth. I am in favour of the latter view, as I believe this payment creates an unnecessary burden on some people.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

In the recent times, people in many parts of the world are migrating from rural areas to cities for numerous reasons. This has not only resulted in excess population, but also caused several problems in many metropolitan cities. This essay will discuss the main cause of this problem as the pollution and suggests the suitable solution to this is to use electric vehicles and plant more trees.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Nowadays, it's a general saying that, the needy's are in every nation of the world, also, each sovereign state has their peculiar ways of combating this situation. This essay will state and explain the causes of global dependency, before proffering an assistance mechanism to this menace.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s continuously emerging era, it is highly recommended to reduce usage, by cars, of fossil fuels and should be replaced by electronic ones. I strongly agree with the statement as electric cars produce near-zero air pollution and cost-effective.

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the government’s investment in arts, music and drama is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public health services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement.

The rate at which entertainment industries are being attended to globally is on the rise.Hence, much of the budgets of nations are allocated to that industry, whereas, a lot more people object to this growing trend on the assumption that financing the medical sector is key.Nonetheless, I support that entertaining the citizenry should be prioritized.

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Some say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

With the advent of the world wide web, the world has turned into a global village where communication across the globe has become quite easy. However, I only partially agree that this has helped people communicate better because it has also led to some serious issues.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, a topic central to today’s debate has revolved around the question whether higher education should expend equal the same amount of money for sports facilities and libraries. Personally, in my viewpoints, I lean toward believing universities still have to give prominence to libraries and invest more allocation of funds in this field rather than sports activities since it has played a much more imperative role.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, a topic central to today’s debate has revolved around the question whether higher education should expend equal the same amount of money for sport facilities and libraries. Personally, in my viewpoints, I lean toward believing universities still have to give prominence to libraries and invest more allocation of funds in this field rather than sport activities since it has played a much more imperative role.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is a concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

It is undeniable that, foreign travel is a growing industry these days. Some people believe that, this growth has brought a positive change to many places. While, others argue that, its negative impact on both the people and environment outweighs the benefits. However, this has more benefits than the drawbacks as discussed below.

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