Some say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

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With the advent of the world wide web, the world has turned into a global village where communication across the globe has become quite easy.

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, I only partially agree that

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has helped people communicate better because it has

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led to some serious issues. If we look at the positive aspects, Internet has made communication faster as compared to what it was three decades ago. Unlike the old days, when people use to write letters and wait for replies for a very long span of time, emails have made communications instant.

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to and fro messaging system has been proved advantageous for various businesses.

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, it

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gives a feeling that, no person is far now.

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, my sister who studies in Ireland is in regular contact with us and we do regular video chats with her.

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, my parents are less concerned about her well being and it

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gives a feeling that she is close to us.

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this

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mode of communication has given rise to various social issues. Some juveniles, these days, are so much engrossed in chatting on social networking websites

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as Facebook, that they are turning anti-social. They prefer interacting with unknown strangers over the Internet, rather than their loved ones around them.

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, a few people

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get in touch with some wrong influential people and get involved in illegal activities as no sanity check or background check is done on them before they start chatting with them. In conclusion,

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the internet has made it possible to communicate to a person with just a click of a button, it has given rise to various new issues which can have detrimental effects on a person's life.

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, we should be cautious while chatting over the Internet and should investigate about unknown people before start interacting with them.

Wed Feb 19 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

instant communication
geographical barriers
real-time video conferencing
physical distance
face-to-face interactions
online communities
forums
shared interests
sense of belonging
language translation tools
communication gaps
international communication
social media platforms
networking sites
personal relationships
workplace communication

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