IELTS Writing Samples of Band 8.5

Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The appearance of advertising has gained the popularity of public attention as it is everywhere around us. Some people believe promoting is useful when looking for a particular product, whereas some others claim advertising unintentionally influences our private lives. Although I concur with some possible drawbacks that advertising brings, but I incline that the advantages would outweigh the downsides....

Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The appearance of advertising has gained a popularity of public attention as it is everywhere around us. Some people believe promoting is useful when looking for a particular product, whereas some others claim advertising unintentionally influences our private lives. Although I concur with some possible drawbacks that advertising brings, but I incline that the advantages would outweigh the downsides....

some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world communication and its relevant tools are counted as basic needs of anybody. Having a cell phone has become very normal, but how about kids? Should they also have cell phones? Some people believe that kids should have this device on behalf of adults, but others hold that it is not a necessity. In this essay, we will argue about this topic and discuss both opinions....

Improvements in health, education and trend are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There have been many sectors in a few nations which require the improvements. The involvement of the health, academic institutions and system of the poor nations is the key parameter for the improvement. However, the authority of the developed nation should help the poor state. I strongly support this view. The essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in below paragraphs....

The government should lower the budget on the arts to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed that the authority should confer prominence spending money for literacy than on the arts. This essay will agree with above trend and gives an example to support the statement....

Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is irrefutable, that innumerable unessential items has been manufacturing in the factories. In my opinion, I do believe with this notion, it is possible because there are manifold unauthorized plants are producing these items in a massive quantity, and the lack of awareness program among the public. Thus, the government must ban these mills and run, the information centre to aware of the public....

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure....

In many countries children are encouraged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

The children, nurturing methods certainly revolutionize as time passes. Some people opine that it is good to involve the tender at an early age in the part time job which provides them a money for their further education and an experience. However, others think that it is totally wrong. The essay will discuss my stance with arguments in below paragraphs....

Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?

Lately, professions like cine-stars, athletes, and musicians are highly remunerated. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the given argument as they highly paid for the work, they do entertain us and their working span is limited in this field. However, there are many professions which can also be paid much such as doctors, militants to name but a few. In this essay, I will elucidate the viewpoint with relevant examples....

A Government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extend do you agree?

A state has accountability to its compatriots to provide them security. That's why others believe that the authority ought to raise expenditure on protection yet expend less on public utilities. In this essay, I will discuss why I strongly agree with the notion that a ministry must invest much more funds on security issues rather than a communal advantage....

Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increase in case has been an important issue in humanity. To a certain extent I agree that solving this problem is by placing criminals in jail. However, I believe that education is an effective method to reduce lawlessness rate....

Some people believe that preserving the natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?

It is commonly believed that preservation of the environment is imperative, yet most people do absolutely nothing to save the planet. In this essay, I will first highlight certain problems which deteriorate our “Mother Earth” and then discuss the possible remedies for it....

People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that the world is developing rapidly, so that people’s quality of life has improved enormously over the decades. Remarkable factors for this change are due to upmarket infrastructure, advanced medical facilities, and various prospects taken by the government to boost people’s living standards. However, some people believe, artificial intelligence (AI) results of the Industrial Revolution may even conquer people’s daily function. I strongly concur with this thought, that the quality of life has grown when compared to centuries ago, which will be discussed in the following passage....

Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?

It is undeniable that the world is developing rapidly, so that people’s quality of life has improved enormously over the decades. Remarkable factors for this change are due to upmarket infrastructure, advanced medical facilities, and various prospects taken by the government to boost people’s living standards. However, some people believe, artificial intelligence (AI) results of the Industrial Revolution may even conquer people’s daily function. I strongly concur with this thought, that the quality of life has grown when compared to centuries ago, which will be discussed in the following passage....

Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether to stay happy or not is someone's own responsibility, as thought of a few. While, others contradict and argue that there are many other things that are considered to play a role in this regard. In my opinion, I believe that several factors including; social, environmental and financial, have a considerable role to make an individual happy....

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some that home teaching is an optimal way of a child's learning, whilst others believe educational institutions are more appropriate for them. This essay will discuss the merits of both sides, then I will elucidate my opinion....

As computers translate quickly and accurately,learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wouldn't it be a waste of time to learn foreign languages if they were translated quickly and easily by computer? Nowadays people think that if computer translate faster and clearly, not needed to learn other languages. I totally disagree with this opinion. We can be known countries history, culture and others by learning foreign languages. This essay will discuss advantages of learning foreign languages....

These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?

Nowadays, more and more people are realizing the convenience of online shopping over the traditional way. Using online shopping has advantages and drawbacks to it. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of shopping online....

Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some students believe that it is better to study their desired occupations in high school. Although this is an interesting thought, I do not agree with the idea that the young pursue their favourite career and refuse to study regular subjects....

Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In myriad nation's tourism has become the most significant source of income, however, its deleterious impacts cannot be unnoticed. In my opinion, I agree with this notion, because it is arising inevitably environmental problems and abolishing the heritage....