Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that students in schools do not get

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an adequate teaching

for maintaining their

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. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement, regarding some absent of important

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materials studied in the physical education

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, unhealthy tight scheduled lifestyle, and lack of school

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programmes. At

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, physical education as the only

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education

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in schools should cover a wide range of

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aspects,

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as proper rest time, healthy diets, and

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the introduction

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of

diseases and their causes. If we refer to what

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has covered in schools, we can see in most of the schools it mainly talk about sports theories, their rules, and sports practices. While

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is a combination of many aspects rather than sports only,

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more non-sports materials should be added to the

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.

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, chances for student to implement a healthy lifestyle while having schools

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rarely hard.

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, students are being fulfilled with a lot of assignments and tight schedules. They

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hardly have

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their leisure time playing with their friends outside. As

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played

outside is one of the most efficient and practical exercises for them, they should be able to do that regularly. Schools

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do not have or support healthy diets in their canteens. In my experiences, I had junk food most of the time from my school canteen, since there are plenty of them sold. In

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case, school authorities should limit food variances that are allowed to sell in their cafeterias.

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, they may give more points or price discounts for those students who buy healthy food from their recommended stalls. In conclusion, schools have not optimized their

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subjects, environments, and programmes to support a healthy lifestyle for their students. They should add

more healthy

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more health

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in

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as well as implement more

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innovative programs, and reducing overtime schedule for their students.