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Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative ?

#people #information #books #development
Nowadays, the internet has gained a lot of attention in terms of searching for
information
 by most of them
Instead
 of books. As there are plenty of resources to gain
information
 through a browser.
However
, online
information
 sometime is not that legitimate. But, books are genuine. One must respect books, as the author puts his whole life experience. I think it is a positive move, but at the same
time
, it completely depends upon the kind of
information
looking
tell anonymously
leaking
. It is very comfortable to look for something to gain knowledge and
also
 from various sources. Online
information
 gets updated at regular interval, it does not take much
time
 to look for the
information
 which we are looking for and it is fascinating to know the reaction of a other members, as it is a global platform.
Such
 as we you are reading a blog which it get updated on a regular basis, at the same
time
 we
also
 get to know the feedback of other reader around the world.
However
, there is no guarantee that all
information
 on the internet is true, you can get into trouble by reading wrong. But, Books are a complete life experience of an author.
Such
 as, if you are following a technical blog, which consist of latest gadget
information
, but there are hidden truth which blogger doesn’t know as blogger didn’t
used
Suggestion
use
 that gadget completely. So there is a small fear of gain false
information
. To conclude, though it is a positive move to get
information
 from various sources on the
internet but
Accept comma addition
internet, but
 at the same
time
 we cannot completely trust
such
information
, I believe.

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