Many people believe that social networking sites(Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree.

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Whilst, some mankinds

argue

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argues

that cross media Facebook, Instagram and other applications have had a vast adverse effect on both humanity and local communities.

However

, in my opinion, it is beneficial for people as well as

club

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a club

the club

clubs

. But it damages the relationship. I would discuss about both views in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are myriad reasons. The

first

and an important reason, it has made easy to communicate with each other.

For example

, if a person lives

faraway

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far away

from his

family

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family, then

then

he can easily connect with his family with the help of social

mobile

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mobility

. It is cheaper.

Moreover

, it

has reduce

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has reduced

the distance;

time

is saved.

Thus

, everyone can easily connect with one another owing to these websites; and make more friends. Contrary above to the statement, it has some negative

effective

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effects

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for

individuals and union. Many people make fake news on these websites; after that they viral it; sometimes it creates great issues in mankind's life, which is harmful for some individuals.

Furthermore

, these days, most of masses spend their precious

time

on these social communication, they waste their

time

and they

procrastination

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procrastinate

their work day by day. For

this

reason, they do not achieve their goal easily.

In addition

, individuals do not take participate in any local activity; during

this

purpose relationship is less since people do not meet each other face to face. In the conclusion, it has both positive and uncooperative

impact

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impacts

on humankind and group. Social networking websites have beneficial of individuals and local communities

such

as easy to communication,

time

saved. But it has

also

negative influence, it damages the relationship among people.

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erosion
face-to-face
interactions
privacy concerns
data breaches
misinformation
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cyberbullying
online harassment
procrastination
productivity
social isolation
dissemination
breeding ground
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