You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regard to a mistake made by the international travel
magazine
about my hometown. Pabna is one of the historical places in Bangladesh. As it is my hometown and born and grew up here I know about
this
place very well.
However
, recently your international travel
magazine
made a serious mistake about the independence day of Pabna. As per historical books, the date would be 10th December 1971 but the
magazine
says 25 December 1971. As it is a popular
magazine
in Bangladesh, if a lot of people get
this
information they would be misguided.
Furthermore
, more often researchers and general people take a reference from popular and reliable news portals.
Although
, the mistake has already been made to fix
this
issue, I think, the best way is to publish another article with the correct date and apologise. In
this
way, the readers of
this
magazine
will be aware of it. Kind Regards, Md Monirul Khan Haidher
Submitted by haidher301 on

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Elaborate more on the importance of correct information.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph is clearly focused on a single idea.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes with a proper greeting and closing.
task achievement
The tone is appropriate for addressing an editor politely.

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