You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to a mistake made by the international travel

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about my hometown. Pabna is one of the historical places in Bangladesh. As it is my hometown and born and grew up here I know about

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place very well.

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, recently your international travel

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made a serious mistake about the independence day of Pabna. As per historical books, the date would be 10th December 1971 but the

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says 25 December 1971. As it is a popular

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in Bangladesh, if a lot of people get

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information they would be misguided.

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, more often researchers and general people take a reference from popular and reliable news portals.

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, the mistake has already been made to fix

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issue, I think, the best way is to publish another article with the correct date and apologise. In

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way, the readers of

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magazine

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will be aware of it. Kind Regards, Md Monirul Khan Haidher

haidher301Thu Nov 14 2024

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task achievement

Elaborate more on the importance of correct information.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph is clearly focused on a single idea.

coherence cohesion

The letter opens and closes with a proper greeting and closing.

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The tone is appropriate for addressing an editor politely.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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