You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to a mistake made by the international travel

magazine

about my hometown. Pabna is one of the historical places in Bangladesh. As it is my hometown and born and grew up here I know about

this

place very well.

However

, recently your international travel

magazine

made a serious mistake about the independence day of Pabna. As per historical books, the date would be 10th December 1971 but the

magazine

says 25 December 1971. As it is a popular

magazine

in Bangladesh, if a lot of people get

this

information they would be misguided.

Furthermore

, more often researchers and general people take a reference from popular and reliable news portals.

Although

, the mistake has already been made to fix

this

issue, I think, the best way is to publish another article with the correct date and apologise. In

this

way, the readers of

this

magazine

will be aware of it. Kind Regards, Md Monirul Khan Haidher

Submitted by haidher301 on Thu Nov 14 2024

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task achievement

Elaborate more on the importance of correct information.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph is clearly focused on a single idea.

coherence cohesion

The letter opens and closes with a proper greeting and closing.

task achievement

The tone is appropriate for addressing an editor politely.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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