Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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The most common problem for the countries around the world is related to the environment. But in recent days, many countries around the world has started facing the challenges related to the

population

and education problems. Being, I am from the

second

largest populated

country

India, I could see that India will be facing a huge problem not only to the

environment but

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environment, but

also

the problems which will

raise

move upward

rise

because of the

population

growth in the

ten years. Due to several activities of human being,

environment

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the environment

is getting spoiled. I see that both environmental and

population

problems are directly

propotional

properly related in size or degree or other measurable characteristics; usually followed by 'to'

proportional

proportionate

. As, the

population

increases eventually

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increases, eventually

environmental problems get increased as well. In

21st century

Suggestion

the 21st century

, India ranks

second

in most populated

country

list

Suggestion

lists

. If the

population

gets increased in the same proportion, sooner India will be the

first

on the list of most populated

country

ranking. India will be in the position of facing all the problems like scarcity of water, land, food, employment, education etc.

This

can be overcome, only when the

awarness

having knowledge of

awareness

about the over

population

spreads across each and every

people

Suggestion

person

in the

country

. Government should take necessary steps to spread the

awarness

having knowledge of

awareness

via various

medium

Suggestion

mediums

media

such

as, TV ad's, radio news, newspaper etc. May be, the government can go one step ahead and impose a rule that each family should have not more than two kids.

Also

the government can explain the advantages of using safety measures during sex in order to avoid

over

too much population

overpopulation

population

. To conclude, there are many issues as mentioned above which will be challenging our

country

ten years due to the over

population

. Only if the government takes necessary action by joining hands along with each

individuals

Suggestion

individual

in the

country

, the issues can be solved and will not have

major impact

Suggestion

a major impact

on our future generations.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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