some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

we

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We

are living in that era where the different, new and plethora of

competition

is

occur

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occurring

in

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at

every stage of life, between the countries, in schools, in reality shows etc. I think a sense of

competition

in children should be encouraged because it is a time

of

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to

compete rather than

co-operate

work together on a common enterprise of project

cooperate

. To embark, I believe that children must have a sense of

competition

because it is beneficial for their awareness of

competition

since childhood because

competition

will

also

be increasing with their age,

for example

, when they are in the primary school, the

competition

of education and skills are

also

there, so they require some knowledge for

handle

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handling

it.

Furthermore if

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Furthermore, if

we take an example of countries, there is a huge amount of battle between the countries

such

as the battle of army strength,

environmnent

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

, economy etc. In

film industry

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the film industry

, a new and talented actors and actresses are increasing day by day. In cricket, a plenty of new cricketers are coming, and they are showing their skills and performances, so it is paramount for encouragement of

competition

to

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for

children because it is easy for them to handle every situation in life and in every difficult circumstances they will find some solutions.

however

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However

, it

is generally believe

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is generally believed

that children who are taught to

co-operate

work together on a common enterprise of project

cooperate

rather than compete become more useful adults because some people believe in peace, so they have a feeling of co-operate in every situation and their way of thinking is different, they think every work is done through silently rather than

conflict but

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conflict, but

I disagree with them because in my opinion,

competition

should be occur because by

this

, everyone

get

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gets

an opportunity to enhance their skills and knowledge. They can easily overcome failures. To sum up,

competition

is a part of our life, so ever

y childr

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child

en must have a sense of

competition

because it is fruitful and sometimes it is adventurous to have some type of competitions