You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take

Dear sir, I hope
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. I would like to inform you that I have joined
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the office

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Thursday after taking a 10-day official trip to Kulalampur, Malaysia for
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the "Unleash

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2019" conference. Now I am seeking your permission to show a computer-based presentation on "How and why of Frugal Innovation". How much do we know about creating and sustaining frugal innovations? That was the exact question the audience were having
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the conference. It will take approximately 2 hours to finish my entire presentation which will answer
question to our colleagues as well, especially in terms of the origin of an idea in low-cost, implementation, and the future of it. We may think of inviting people not only from our department but
from other pertinent sectors.
, as the conference hall of building A will be fully booked from 18th to 20th December, I altered the location into meeting room 1 of the same building. Appreciate your time and effort on
. I look forward to receiving your permission at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Zarif Enam
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