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You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take

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Dear sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good
spirit
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. I would like to inform you that I have joined
office
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last
 Thursday after taking a 10-day official trip to Kulalampur, Malaysia for
"Unleash
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 2019" conference. Now I am seeking your permission to show a computer-based presentation on "How and why of Frugal Innovation". How much do we know about creating and sustaining frugal innovations? That was the exact question the audience were having
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 the conference. It will take approximately 2 hours to finish my entire presentation which will answer
this
 question to our colleagues as well, especially in terms of the origin of an idea in low-cost, implementation, and the future of it. We may think of inviting people not only from our department but
also
 from other pertinent sectors.
However
, as the conference hall of building A will be fully booked from 18th to 20th December, I altered the location into meeting room 1 of the same building. Appreciate your time and effort on
this
. I look forward to receiving your permission at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Zarif Enam
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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