More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is correctly said that due to modernisation everywhere, some families do not want children.
However
, there are some people who demand that not wanting children is surrounded by some selfish reasons. But other people view that may be due to overpopulation and
freedom
oriented, couples do not want children.
This
essay will discuss both the opinions.
Moreover
, I support the
second
opinion. Now-a-days, couples are mostly busy in offices. Both husband and wife are working. They do not get sufficient time to
rare
located in or toward the back or rear
rear
up their children properly. Because of that, their life will be
make
Suggestion
made
child
free.
For example
, couples who worked for 15 hours a day, in
this
case, they made their mind completely money-oriented, not
child
-oriented.
Also
, they think that producing
child
Suggestion
a child
children
is a waste of time, energy and money. People claim that
this
is entirely a selfish reason. It is true that for their selfishness, they
won't
feel or have a desire for; want strongly
want
children. But, other people viewed that those who do not give birth to children may be due to some meaningful reason.
For instance
, most of the countries are over populated now-a-days.
Besides
, over population creates lots of problems
such
as shortage of food, problems of education, lack of jobs etc. For
this
reason, more couples are deciding to be
child
free. Another cause is that
freedom
to live a life without children. When a woman conceived a
child
, from that time, she does not have
freedom
to do anything according to her will. After giving birth
also, she has
Suggestion
, she also has
lots of obstacles. She just missed her independence.
That is
why they do not want children. To sum up, I agree with the view that due to not increasing population and desire for
freedom
is a noble cause for
child
free life in more couples.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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